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Alex 2 - colour by carolynthefairy Alex 2 - colour by carolynthefairy
Model - Alex

My first proper photoshoot!!! OMg its was amazing and i loved it!

Any advice??
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akaethan Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2007  Student
Nice angle, good position. The only thing to change would really be the angle of the head. She needs to be looking more towards you, otherwise, it messes with porportions, and makes her head look alittle small. Another note, something I learned from having my headshots taken and taking other peoples, have them raise there chin to be in a more straight view in line with the camera, it helps to knock out the chin shadow.

Hope that helps, great job so far, like what you've taken.
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carolynthefairy Featured By Owner May 1, 2007
Thanks for the advice and the lovely comment!
x
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GiZmO0o Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
cool. love the blue she's wearing!
very nice look. lovely smile.

the focus on this is on her chest, thats a bit strange. the dof is very low. thats why her face is allready a bit blurred. a higher F rate will improve this.
try a more intense lighting. from diffrent angles etc...

cheers GiZ
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carolynthefairy Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007
i was wondering why her face was a little blurry! now i know it was because the focus was on her chest! ha! lol.. didnt notice.. thanks for advice.... :D
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GiZmO0o Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
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np ;)

cheers GiZ
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